This sounded great, some of your sentences were lengthy but overall great
Good Job! This sounds great. I couldn't always understand exactly what you were saying but I got the gist of it.
This was good! Audio wasn't completely clear
You gave more emphasis on some words than you should have ("covered costs"), you want the emphasis on the important things. The story ended somewhat abruptly.
This sounded great, some of your sentences were lengthy but overall great
ReplyDeleteGood Job! This sounds great. I couldn't always understand exactly what you were saying but I got the gist of it.
ReplyDeleteThis was good! Audio wasn't completely clear
ReplyDeleteYou gave more emphasis on some words than you should have ("covered costs"), you want the emphasis on the important things. The story ended somewhat abruptly.
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